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Comment by John Griffin on May 26, 2017 at 21:17

Thanks Danie. I had a problem uploading and the settings got lost.

Thanks for the crit. Am working on skin retouching at the moment and will submit two new shots this weekend with skin retouching

Comment by Danie Bester on May 26, 2017 at 20:59

Settings? The lighting is really good, but the pose, angle and crop feels uncomfortable. It almost feels as if the model is posing for someone else, and the angle shooting up her nostrils is not quite flattering, while the arms in the bottom corners are quite awkwardly framed. Cropping the bottom area out, for a head and shoulder portrait will work much better. I also recommend that you do a bit of skin retouching on the face, 



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