Taken at Rainforest in Krugersdorp

Nikon D5300 at 92mm focal length
1/800 sec
ISO 400
F4.2

All natural light, retouching done in Lightroom

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Comment by Nicolene Theunissen on December 14, 2017 at 14:40

Hi Danie en Leon, lol. Ek het geweet Danie gaan se sy lyk soos die undertaker, hahaha. Die idee was die corpse bride. Grap net. Ek het however geweet die lig van onder af is nie reg nie maar het gedink dis 'n mooi foto nonetheless...Gelukkig is dit nie vir 'n bruid nie maar net ek wat bietjie oefen van my kant af. 

Comment by LEON PELSER on December 8, 2017 at 11:22

Ek dink die bruid gaan van haar foto hou...ek kan sien sy lyk gelukkig, afgesien van foutjies wat Danie tereg uitgewys het.

Comment by Danie Bester on November 28, 2017 at 12:42

Nicky, the direction of the lighting leaves the eye sockets dark, which is a no-go (reflection coming from below result in horror-lighting). A well directed flash / reflector, would have opened up the shadows and allowed a more 3D look. As it is, the tones are flat and your subject disappear against the mushy background with no separation. The pose / expression is a bit weird as the bride makes no connection with the camera. If your intent was a candid expression, you needed that connection with the camera whereas much tighter frame would have been the answer.  

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